tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317183753658499438.post8182339283192345340..comments2024-03-28T15:33:35.251-05:00Comments on Creative Instigation: Creativity Exercise: What's wrong with this sentence?Janhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12432885086499343101noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317183753658499438.post-1141963737046136162011-08-31T11:20:20.668-05:002011-08-31T11:20:20.668-05:00Love these, and the answers that people are emaili...Love these, and the answers that people are emailing. Keep 'em coming!Janhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12432885086499343101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317183753658499438.post-7032840161117547162011-08-31T08:46:43.656-05:002011-08-31T08:46:43.656-05:00They shouldn't minimize the one death.They shouldn't minimize the one death.Vickihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10088213674978515287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8317183753658499438.post-27758791643733407592011-08-31T08:29:47.520-05:002011-08-31T08:29:47.520-05:00To me, the sentence is upside down. The most impor...To me, the sentence is upside down. The most important item should end the statement. <br /><br />Also, the way it's written the second phrase doesn't amend the first. It could just as easily be, "There was only one death in the area, but my house has a garage."<br /><br />Change the conjunction to "and" and you link the two thoughts.<br /><br />How about this, "Extensive damage was reported in the area, and there was one related death."Bud Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613675297997395991noreply@blogger.com